Hidden
Lily, brilliant! I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting to read the next bit, biting my nails for Lily (and still pitying Victor just a tiny bit.)
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WOW! This drew me in so fast that I felt as breathless as Lily must have. The first person viewpoint was the perfect way to tell this story. The thing about seeing this story in first person is that...
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I would try to, Ann, but then I'd have to post it on a private page. This was nerve-wracking enough, just wondering how it would be received with what details and allusions are in the story. Thank...
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Hidden is an awesome piece of work and I know you dug deep into some challenging and uncomfortable places to create this story. Thank you for trusting us - your loyal readers - to understand that...
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Everyone has said it all already and so much better than I ever would. Just don't let us wait too long for what comes next, please...
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RooCrowe wrote: The characterization of Victor is spot on and terrifying in his lack of humanity and remorse. He is an angry child who is punishing his brother by taking away his toys and playing with...
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In character, I tried to even make sure that Lily understands where he's coming from, though it doesn't make the situation any less frightening or dangerous or tolerable. But yes, that's exactly...
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